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July 9, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

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I run and dive into the watery wasteland
I swim and swim till I am in the middle
My arms freeze and my legs stop kicking
I float for a second then I go down
I sink lower and lower
My mind say to move but my body does not obey
The last of my air trickles out
I smile as the black takes me
With a surge of light I am gone
Off into sweet bliss

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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I wrote this when I was tired so I am sorry if it is not any good.
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SoulPoetry PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2013 at 3:42 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
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"I will work harder" (animal farm boxer the horse)

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That last line will be stuck in my head for a while.
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:46 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

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"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

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Unique. I do like this one a lot, actually.
Blue..Skies.. SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2012 at 12:14 pm
Blue..Skies.. SILVER, Lynnwood, Washington
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"You were born an original, don't die a copy."

"The best curve on your body is your smile." :)

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It goes to show that even when your tired you can still produce such good work. Keep it up! :D
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 10:03 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

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I think this is great, but it's also a bit dark. If you need to talk about anything, I'm here :) Great poem, keep writing
albinotiger GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 9:39 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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This is really good! I love how the body diobeys the mind! Real poetry!
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 3:46 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
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I think you're cool and all, but are you a masochist? Just wondering. Hope not. Don't die! Lol