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Let's leave this place
Let's go and never look behind
Leave the bag, Leave the case
Hit play on our lives, rewind
Lace up your shoes and run with me
We can go, we can get away
Lock the door, throw away the key
Not caring where we go or where we stay
Let's leave this place, just you and me
We will never look behind
Hit play on our lives, rewind





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Hamzawaseem said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 12:36 pm
a nice work!
 
TraceS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:49 pm
Not going to lie, I want to see an extended version of this. I think this may be one of my favorites from you. Excellent work.
 
justme242 said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 6:01 pm

really good poem love the rhyming 

 

 
realbeautifulheart said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 3:35 pm
I like this... :) short 'n sweet
 
RandomInspiration said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 3:37 pm
I really like this, it reminds me of the song Check Yes Juliet by We the Kings.
 
Apollo77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 2:37 pm
This is a cool idea, i love rhyme and you do it well, and the story is just vague enough to make it really interesting!
 
hippiechick99 said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 7:28 am
I really really like this, but I think you could've made it longer. The word choice is good, and even though it's a bit confusing at times, I really like it. I'm rating it 5/5 :)))
 
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