Play it Again

July 3, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi


Let's leave this place
Let's go and never look behind
Leave the bag, Leave the case
Hit play on our lives, rewind
Lace up your shoes and run with me
We can go, we can get away
Lock the door, throw away the key
Not caring where we go or where we stay
Let's leave this place, just you and me
We will never look behind
Hit play on our lives, rewind


The author's comments:
I saw a photo and then ideas started to fill my head.

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on Mar. 19 2013 at 12:36 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

a nice work!

on Aug. 2 2012 at 6:49 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Not going to lie, I want to see an extended version of this. I think this may be one of my favorites from you. Excellent work.

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 6:01 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

really good poem love the rhyming 

 


on Jul. 17 2012 at 3:35 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a package that you have to sign for. Yes, it's free. No, there's no guarantee as to what it holds. Open with caution, it's 'FRAGILE'." (I made this up.)

I like this... :) short 'n sweet

on Jul. 10 2012 at 3:37 pm
RandomInspiration GOLD, Schulenburg, Texas
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh as much as you breathe, and love as long as you live <3

I really like this, it reminds me of the song Check Yes Juliet by We the Kings.

on Jul. 10 2012 at 2:37 pm
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
20 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.”
"Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you."
-Ernest Hemingway

This is a cool idea, i love rhyme and you do it well, and the story is just vague enough to make it really interesting!

on Jul. 10 2012 at 7:28 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really really like this, but I think you could've made it longer. The word choice is good, and even though it's a bit confusing at times, I really like it. I'm rating it 5/5 :)))


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