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You promise to catch me when I fall
You promise to listen when I talk
You promise to hold me when I cry
You promise to be strong when I am weak
You promise to be there when I need you
You promise to be there when I need you
You promise to give me space I want it
You promise to never let me be scared
You promise that I can trust you
You promise to be my best friend
You promise to accept me for who I am
You promise to love me when no one else does
I promise to do the same




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ZingaraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 7:56 pm:
This is so sweet! Love it :)
 
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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:34 pm:
Beautiful! Absolutely magnificent! Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
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Mr. Kuttner said...
Jul. 20, 2012 at 1:14 pm:
Beautiful stuff- suggest you edit the lines that end in "I" (personal pronoun)- just move the I to th next line ex.: when/ I talk- puts more emphisis, combines doer and action, and just sounds better.  Your writing is brilliant- hope your summer is full of fun!!
 
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