June 17, 2012
i look at the stars,
tonight their shining bright,
they whisper to me,
"you can do it" but i can't.
i lay in my bed,
and listen to the moon,
"why can't you try harder?
you can do it."
i don't have the answer,
and neither do you.

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east_of_ada This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 17, 2013 at 10:53 pm
so sweet, so sweet, so sweet~i liked the lowercase(cause as you can tell, i do it too which makes me feel fab-er to know i'm not the only anti-uppercase poet) and i enjoyed the inner quotes~ada
Kyrstin replied...
Apr. 4, 2014 at 12:35 pm
aw thanks so much <3 that's really swee of you (:
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