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June 17, 2012
By the.girl.in.the.background SILVER, Friend, Nebraska
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the.girl.in.the.background SILVER, Friend, Nebraska
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\\\"and the day came when the risk to remain the same was greater than the risk to change. . .

it is, after all, the only hope for a cocon to become a butterfly\\\"

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Tonight is the night that i make all your dreams come true. Tonight is the night finally i say i love you. But that night was the night that you thought you'd say our love wasn't true. So tomorrow night will be the night i write a note that says my life is through.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
this is something i wrote because this guy turned me down but lead me on to believe that he loved mend i had always had problems telling people how i felt and i was so ready to tell him that i loved him and he told me it was a big joke just to get all my deep secrets and i went home and i just felt like dying but i held on strong and this is what happened
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