Remeber me

June 27, 2012
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When I die, when I leave
For you, I want you not to grieve
It’s my time, it’s alright
Let me go, let me through the light
Do not cry, do not weep,
Its time for me to go to sleep
With you I will always be
One thing I ask
Never forget me.





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MadHater said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 4:21 pm
Very, very good
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 11:03 am
Very sad, like the author is on his/her deathbad and very emotional. I really like it!
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 11:03 am
Very sad, like the author is on his/her deathbad and very emotional. I really like it!
 
Proud_To_Be_An_AmericanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 1:09 pm
This is a good poem, very true, great job Naku.
 
spudbud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 1:31 pm
 Lovely poem! Great work, as always, naku.
 
youngspeare said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 6:47 am
Aw, it's really emotional and very nicely brought out! Great piece. 
 
Apollo77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 2:40 pm
I think this is beautiful! I kind of wish there was more of a structure, but the emotion is really great. I like how it feels like your shaking someone off, like let me go! I think that is well done...really pretty!
 
hippiechick99 said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 7:24 am
I really like both of the poems. I think you could've put them in one article, but other than that, very breathtaking. Keep writing :)))
 
sweetwannabeme said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 8:24 pm
i really like this poemm.! i can really connect to it and i bet many others can too ;)
 
Black_Rose_Princess said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:39 pm
Beautiful; it has a kind of sad tone, but at the same time there is some hope, so in a way it seemed bittersweet. Very good, please continue writing.
 
Hayley567 said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:17 pm
it is much like a song.. very good though. i like it 
 
Sherrel said...
Jul. 1, 2012 at 4:08 pm
very catchy, almost reminiscent of a sad song.
 
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