Remeber me

June 27, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi


When I die, when I leave
For you, I want you not to grieve
It’s my time, it’s alright
Let me go, let me through the light
Do not cry, do not weep,
Its time for me to go to sleep
With you I will always be
One thing I ask
Never forget me.


The author's comments:
This goes hand-inhand with my other poem Remeber us. Be sure to read it! Thanks!

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on Apr. 1 2013 at 4:21 pm
MadelynHope BRONZE, Trophy Club, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them." -Walt Disney

Very, very good

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:03 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Very sad, like the author is on his/her deathbad and very emotional. I really like it!

on Aug. 10 2012 at 11:03 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Very sad, like the author is on his/her deathbad and very emotional. I really like it!

Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 1:09 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is a good poem, very true, great job Naku.

spudbud GOLD said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 1:31 pm
spudbud GOLD, Newton, Kansas
19 articles 4 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where is the wise man? Where is the scholar? Have they not been made such a fool in their squalor?

For they desired a sign and sought for the wise

When the precursor of life was right in front of their eyes" - Wolves at the Gate

 Lovely poem! Great work, as always, naku.

on Jul. 16 2012 at 6:47 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
1 article 0 photos 273 comments

Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

Aw, it's really emotional and very nicely brought out! Great piece. 

on Jul. 10 2012 at 2:40 pm
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
20 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.”
"Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you."
-Ernest Hemingway

I think this is beautiful! I kind of wish there was more of a structure, but the emotion is really great. I like how it feels like your shaking someone off, like let me go! I think that is well done...really pretty!

on Jul. 10 2012 at 7:24 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really like both of the poems. I think you could've put them in one article, but other than that, very breathtaking. Keep writing :)))

on Jul. 2 2012 at 8:24 pm
TheLittleThings SILVER, Bronx, New York
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You're only given a little spark of madness, you mustn't lose it." Robin Williams

i really like this poemm.! i can really connect to it and i bet many others can too ;)

on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:39 pm
Pika_Princess, Escondido, California
0 articles 0 photos 118 comments
Beautiful; it has a kind of sad tone, but at the same time there is some hope, so in a way it seemed bittersweet. Very good, please continue writing.

on Jul. 2 2012 at 1:17 pm
Hayley567 BRONZE, Columbus, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
to never see things in the eyes of a writer, will never be fully seen.

it is much like a song.. very good though. i like it 

Sherrel GOLD said...
on Jul. 1 2012 at 4:08 pm
Sherrel GOLD, Kenton, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sweet like tea on a coffee day"

very catchy, almost reminiscent of a sad song.




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