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The Road to Giving Up

June 21, 2012
By LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Friends are the family you choose.


Wise words saying
“Tomorrow’s a better day”
And no matter how much I want it to be true
I know in my heart it’s not a reality

“Tomorrow’s a better day”
The words register in my head, but I see right through them
I know in my heart it’s not a reality,
Tomorrow will bring around the same depth of despair

The words register in my head, but I see right through them
Knowing (that) they’re full of lies and broken promises
Tomorrow will bring around the same depth of despair
Driving myself mad inside

Knowing that they’re full of lies and broken promises
I learn to start keeping to myself
Driving myself mad inside
The emotions start boiling over

I learn to start keeping to myself
But blocking others out is harder than it seems
The emotions start boiling over
Until you finally give in to giving up


The author's comments:
I'm a little rusty, kind of stopped writing and now I'm trying to get back into it but here's a little piece I put together. Hope you enjoy! Oh, and leave a comment/rate? I like (and need) constructive criticism and really I'd really love to know your opinions! :)

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