Death of a best friend

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After her suicide it killed me,
left me depressed as she,
with nobody to help me,
with nobody to blame,
It did nothing but drive me completely insane,
I loved her, and I thought she loved me,
But the pain does nothing but torture thee





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ToriTerrify said...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:25 pm
i'm sorry about your friend, and this poem is beautiful, but i think it would be even better if you expanded it a bit
 
Macerz replied...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:33 pm
It was just what was on my mind at the point in time, I wrote a lot about her on paper, just not on my iPad, thanks for your comment
 
Lia692 said...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:23 pm
Obviously from the heart, and well put. The only thing that doesn't fit is the 'thee' at the end. Other than that, very good job.
 
Macerz replied...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:33 pm
Sorry, it was just what was on my mind... Thanks for your comment
 
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