Death of a best friend

June 26, 2012
By Macerz GOLD, Queen Creek, Arizona
Macerz GOLD, Queen Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
i once cried because i had no shoes until i met a man with no feet!


After her suicide it killed me,
left me depressed as she,
with nobody to help me,
with nobody to blame,
It did nothing but drive me completely insane,
I loved her, and I thought she loved me,
But the pain does nothing but torture thee


The author's comments:
My best friend killed herself in December 2011

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Macerz GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:33 pm
Macerz GOLD, Queen Creek, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i once cried because i had no shoes until i met a man with no feet!

Sorry, it was just what was on my mind... Thanks for your comment

Macerz GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:33 pm
Macerz GOLD, Queen Creek, Arizona
13 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i once cried because i had no shoes until i met a man with no feet!

It was just what was on my mind at the point in time, I wrote a lot about her on paper, just not on my iPad, thanks for your comment

on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:25 pm
ToriTerrify GOLD, Thornton, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as you know who you are as a person, nothing else in the world matters." - Andy Biersack

i'm sorry about your friend, and this poem is beautiful, but i think it would be even better if you expanded it a bit

Lia692 said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:23 pm
Lia692, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Life should be viewed from afar and lived from close up."

Obviously from the heart, and well put. The only thing that doesn't fit is the 'thee' at the end. Other than that, very good job.




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