Spirit Corridors, They Wonder Thoughts

June 16, 2012
By LilChip666 BRONZE, Flatonia, Texas
LilChip666 BRONZE, Flatonia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
In the end, we're all just chalklines on the concrete. Drawn only to be washed away. For the time that i've been given, I am what I am. --Five Finger Death Punch

Art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable.
--Cesar Cruz


A walk through the sacred corridors of my mind,
To relax and wait for my thoughts.
I see only red,
As all my thoughts have bled,
Out of my mouth in streams,
As if I were reliving my dreams.
Almost as if I were in a trance,
Changes of my mind with every glance.
While asking the sacred corridors of my mind,
To relax and wait for my thoughts.


The author's comments:
A rewrite of my "Wondering Thoughts." I looked at the old version and thought it seemed childish somehow, so I rewrote it and I must say I like this version better.

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on Jun. 25 2012 at 7:00 pm
LilChip666 BRONZE, Flatonia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
In the end, we're all just chalklines on the concrete. Drawn only to be washed away. For the time that i've been given, I am what I am. --Five Finger Death Punch

Art should comfort the disturbed and disturb the comfortable.
--Cesar Cruz

thanks. :) It's really awesome getting your feedback, especially when it's positive. 

on Jun. 22 2012 at 2:13 pm
allaboutmylife PLATINUM, Miami, Florida
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This is so good I love it even if it didn't come from something happy Art never does




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