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Its flame,
Drying up the countryside.
Fiery and untamed,
Swoops across the land.

Makes the grass as dry as sand,
As plants go up in flames.
Leaves the leftovers to mar,
The picturesque country lanes.




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writer3499This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 2:14 am:
I really like this poem!! I loved the adjectives you used because it makes the topic so mch more real so great job!!! Would you mind checking out my work?
 
Aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 5:35 pm :
Thank you for commenting! I'll be sure to reciprocate as soon as I can.
 
Aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 5:35 pm :
Thank you for commenting! I'll be sure to reciprocate as soon as I can.
 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 4:12 pm:
Sorry I posted it twice-I didn't think it worked the first time.
 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 4:11 pm:

I like this a lot! The figurative speech is excellent. Good job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 4:11 pm:

I like this a lot! The figurative speech is excellent. Good job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
Aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 6, 2012 at 4:33 pm :
Thanks for commenting, I'll be sure to return the gesture :)
 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2012 at 8:57 am :
That's me^
 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 3, 2012 at 8:38 pm :
Mind checking out some of my work?:)
 
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KylieKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 1:01 am:
Oh! I love it!
 
Aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 9:09 am :
Thank you!
 
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