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Puzzle Pieces

"Puzzle pieces" is the phrase that comes to mind
When I curl my body against yours.
My back pressed to hard muscle wearing soft skin.
Our legs entwined in a complex maze.
Your strong arms wrapped around my delicate frame
Like a protective cage.
Your gentle breaths warm the back of my neck,
Your nose buried in my hair.
I inhale that familiar scent of you,
The one I can never properly describe
In the poems I try to write for you.
I don’t need to see your face;
I already know that your golden hair is askew,
Your long lashes casting shadows on your cheekbones
As you sleep serenely.
I hope you’re smiling softly,
The way you say I do
When I dream of the way we fit to each other
Like two puzzle pieces
Separated for so long,
Finally come together,
Never wanting to part again.



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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 5:23 pm:

Loved this! The idea was original and unique, and your message added to the perfection! Good job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 7:42 pm :
That's me^
 
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DanielM said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 6:20 pm:

"Like two puzzle pieces Separated for so long, Finally come together, Never wanting to part again." those were my favorite lines.

this poem was awesome. it was really good i also liked your message too.

Suggestion: I would maybe start with a hook in the begging. other that i really liked it

 
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CaptainsXAngel said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 6:17 pm:
So pretty! Love it!
 
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