It's To Late

June 9, 2012
By BackwoodsPrincess GOLD, Hempstead, Texas
BackwoodsPrincess GOLD, Hempstead, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
i've got a firecracker for a mouth so dont make a spark. ~ muoi


Here I am;
Sitting here with my head under the water, looking at you through the haze waiting for you to pull me out, But then I realized ...
It's to late...I've already drowned... And I'm forever gone without anyone to care for me anymore.
Without you I'm so blue in the face because it's to late... I've already drowned... And NO ONE can save me now...



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on Jun. 15 2012 at 10:52 pm
BackwoodsPrincess GOLD, Hempstead, Texas
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i've got a firecracker for a mouth so dont make a spark. ~ muoi

thank you i'll keep that in mindand im not too good w/ that stuff but i'll work on it

AriShine GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 10:19 am
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one." -Abraham Lincoln

This is nice, but it should be "too" late instead of "to". Other than that, I love the message you are trying to communicate. Keep writing!


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