Your Eyes

May 31, 2012
By Poeloverdementedlady BRONZE, Council Bluffs, Iowa
Poeloverdementedlady BRONZE, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream" -Edgar Allan Poe


Will I ever understand
This emotional roller coaster?
It's bitter sweet
Is this love?
Your eyes bore into me
They burn a hole in my heart
Just the memory hurts
And leaves me empty
Your eyes...
They put a permanent hole in me.


The author's comments:
This poem might have some flowing problems, but it has feeling... Criticism please?

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