My Dog

May 20, 2012
By subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I have no nation to fight for... my country is the earth and I am a citizen of the world."


My dog gnaws at the bark.
My dog breaks bubbled limbs
at the expense of his mouth’s ridge.
When My Dog hustles
lower animals bustle.
Disconnected “D I P L O M A T” and
blunderer fit to burst.

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Blue jays’ query?
They don’t find one in fleeing…
for they are and will and were
more graceful
than said blunderous Dog,
and they know it.



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on Jun. 6 2012 at 9:10 pm
subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have no nation to fight for... my country is the earth and I am a citizen of the world."

Thank you very much, Kenzie! I'm on way over to your page now.

on Jun. 6 2012 at 9:10 pm
subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have no nation to fight for... my country is the earth and I am a citizen of the world."

Thanks, Baya! I'm on it

on Jun. 6 2012 at 8:34 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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Blunderous dog. That is really poetic. You should tottally check out my poem- Aloof. So your speed:) Keep up the good work!

on Jun. 5 2012 at 9:16 pm
Kenziemcm13 PLATINUM, Rutherfordton, North Carolina
36 articles 5 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
A simple story can tell an entire story!~~ ME
Pictures tell a 1000 words~IDK :P

I liked it! I like dogs too! Haha Can you go check out some of my work I would be ever s grateful to hear what your opinions on them are! I would be honored for someone of your skill to read/rate comment on some of mine! :)


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