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My dog gnaws at the bark.
My dog breaks bubbled limbs
at the expense of his mouth’s ridge.
When My Dog hustles
lower animals bustle.
Disconnected “D I P L O M A T” and
blunderer fit to burst.

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Blue jays’ query?
They don’t find one in fleeing…
for they are and will and were
more graceful
than said blunderous Dog,
and they know it.




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subliminal96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 9:10 pm:
Thank you very much, Kenzie! I'm on way over to your page now.
 
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subliminal96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 9:10 pm:
Thanks, Baya! I'm on it
 
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Basya44 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 8:34 pm:
Blunderous dog. That is really poetic. You should tottally check out my poem- Aloof. So your speed:) Keep up the good work!
 
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Kenziemcm13 said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 9:16 pm:
I liked it! I like dogs too! Haha Can you go check out some of my work I would be ever s grateful to hear what your opinions on them are! I would be honored for someone of your skill to read/rate comment on some of mine! :)
 
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