When Did You Ever Care?

May 28, 2012
By doctor_fearless PLATINUM, Festus, Missouri
doctor_fearless PLATINUM, Festus, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"It is always the right time to do what is right."

Do you see those?
Those, right there
Right there on her wrists?
On her legs?

"I love her!"
Yes. Of course you do!
When you call her all she isn't
Tell me that's how you love her

So when she kills herself
From your torture
Tell me when you ever cared
Tell me with tears in your eyes how much you loved her

Tell me now what you've ever done to make her smile
Tell me when you were there for her
"There's a lot you don't know about her."
I'm sure I know more than you do

Because when I'm holding her tight in my arms
With tears down both our faces
And you told her she's a mistake
Never tell me you love her.

You obviously don't

Tell me right now
Such a hypocrite
"I know her more than she thinks I do"
Yes! That's why she hates you!

So while she sits at home
I'll send her a message
"I love you"
Any chance I get, I'll say it

Don't even tell her you love her,
You're just making it worse
She's beautiful
And you do not need to cause any more pain

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on Jun. 4 2012 at 12:44 pm
Kenziemcm13 PLATINUM, Rutherfordton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
A simple story can tell an entire story!~~ ME
Pictures tell a 1000 words~IDK :P

I like it! Can you please read, rate and comment some of my poems? I would love to hear what you have to say about my work!


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