Liquid Happiness MAG

May 27, 2012
By Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 22 comments

The afternoon sun
warm and comforting
sliding over my skin
like a blanket
kissing my cheeks
nose
turning the tips of my hair
golden
transforming my blood
to liquid summer
Liquid happiness



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asofnow GOLD said...
on May. 26 2014 at 11:03 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I liked it. The repetition at the end was especially uplifitng.

on Sep. 21 2012 at 4:09 pm
CelebrateDifferences, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Gods of Olympus.” Piper stared at Leo. “What happened to you?”
His hair was greased back. He had welding goggles on his forehead, a lipstick mark on his cheek, tattoos all over his arms, and a T-shirt that read HOT STUFF, BAD BOY, and TEAM LEO.
“Long story,” he said.”

Simply a magical read.

on Jun. 3 2012 at 1:05 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a package that you have to sign for. Yes, it's free. No, there's no guarantee as to what it holds. Open with caution, it's 'FRAGILE'." (I made this up.)

I like the shortness. Interesting perspective. As I color, I see this poem as yellow. A golden, sun-flecked, sparkling, warm and shiny yellow :)

on Jun. 2 2012 at 6:29 pm
lenathetiger BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Many (people) were increasingly of the opinion that they'd all made a big mistake in coming down from the trees in the first place. And some said that even the trees had been a bad move, and that no one should ever have left the oceans."

I see it like a movie. I really felt like my wrists were bleeding yellow :) that might sound strange..

on Jun. 2 2012 at 2:49 pm
Hibiscus SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
9 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"None of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love." - Mother Teresa

Lovely poem with vived imagery! Great job! 

abbey92 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2012 at 11:44 pm
abbey92 GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
she smiles like she's so tough
she's just someones daughter waiting for some one to love her

never leave the one you love for the one you like because the one you like will leave you for the one they love

short n sweet... 5 stars


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