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Religion At It's Finest!

May 22, 2012
By JackieH PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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JackieH PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't break character, you've got a lot of heart. ~ The Killers

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Who knew it was true?
O, what these words can do!
Written above these lines of blue,
For a non-believer like you.

Do you not love
The Man above?
Have you 'had enough'
With the religious man's bluff?

Well, I've got something to say.
Why don't you just pray?
Ask Him for a new day
Instead of pushing Him away.

Now, how do you feel?
Because, you know He's real.
Just a new appeal.
Heaven for your love is a pretty sweet deal.

© Jonathan C., Tracy, CA

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Feeling kind of religious. What else to do but write about it?
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LovelyDuckling GOLD said...
on May. 25 2012 at 1:37 pm
LovelyDuckling GOLD, Hamilton, Montana
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A vision without action is a hallucination.

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i love this! way to show your faith... mind checking out my poem 'those things that never were'