Take Care

May 21, 2012
By OrianK GOLD, Petah Tikva, Other
OrianK GOLD, Petah Tikva, Other
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Sometimes I wonder
What I am going to do
Without you
Sometimes I wish you
Will stop worrying about
Me and start taking care of
Because sometimes you
Forget that I can't survive
Without you
I just can't.

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on May. 23 2012 at 1:43 pm
LovelyDuckling GOLD, Hamilton, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
A vision without action is a hallucination.

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Hayley F. said...
on May. 22 2012 at 8:02 am
Hayley F., Waterford, Wisconsin
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I liked the cliche you used "  I can't survive without you," I also liked the figurative langugage.


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