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cold, moist, earth pillows my head
horrific, blood curdling, screams are my lulabies

through fields and meadows laden with the blood of my brethren
through the crimson flames

children burning
stars of david being singed away into ash
metal gates enclose me
torpid smell envelops the air

decaying corps lay
shriveled and limp
lifeless, cold

hope has vanished
death has conquered all

in the eyes of many
God is no more
Just a wisp...
floating farther and farther away from its people

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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 1:52 pm:
Well that was very interesting and it was really nice to read, but because I'm Christian I obviously believe AND KNOW that God will never leave you, me, or anyone. But nice job writing it. I think you captured the emotion of the people well. Can you comment and rate some of my work?
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Mar. 10, 2013 at 10:46 am :
 thanks! and I am not really that religious so i try not to intergrate any type of religion or God into my writing.  But yeah! I will defintley rate some of your work
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