Back Of Your Mind

April 30, 2012
By AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"


Back of your mind.
Here I will hide.
Hate that I am here.
That you cannot see me.
I beg for attention.
You don’t hear my silent tears.
The pain on my face is unseen by you.
Can’t you see?
Yes it is me.
Look at me.
Can’t you see?
She takes up your mind.
But here I will hide.
In the back…
Back of your mind.



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on Dec. 12 2012 at 7:54 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

No... My sister is...

on Dec. 4 2012 at 12:31 pm
L7SquariaN GOLD, Madison Heights, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, Life, Loyalty, and Living Long Like Legends. That's that L7.

Well that's even worse :(

Are you the "she" that takes up his mind?

on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:56 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Lol thanks... What most people probably don't get from this poem is that it isn't about a boy/girl relationship... It is about a relationship with my dad... and his relationship with my little sister... 

on Dec. 4 2012 at 1:54 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Lol thanks... What most people probably don't get from this poem is that it isn't about a boy/girl relationship... It is about a relationship with my dad... and his relationship with my little sister... 

on Dec. 1 2012 at 3:19 am
L7SquariaN GOLD, Madison Heights, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, Life, Loyalty, and Living Long Like Legends. That's that L7.

Ahh the fruits of jealousy/being second. Always unnerving.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Everything came quick and short, as they should have since the speaker is not the main focus of the mind. This was really expertly done.
(sometimes the best poetry comes from babbling ;P)

on Sep. 18 2012 at 11:32 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Thanks :) When I read it after it had been posted a while I felt like I babbled alot in it... Sometimes I feel that about alot of my poems on here but people seem to like it...

on Aug. 26 2012 at 6:01 pm
Writer38942849 SILVER, Aiken, South Carolina
5 articles 3 photos 17 comments
this is good :)




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