Dream-Caught Paper

Really good visual with having the words "Heads peaking around" and "Watching me". I find it odd how you kind of deter from the begining of your poem to the end; you start off by romanticizing about the "lovely things" you could write, but then go on to describing the words - I assume - staring back at at you and "peaking around the page's edge" as you dream. The two things have no real link together in my mind, you know? I'm curious to your take on it.

I love this poem. You have a really special way of describing that makes the message of your poem easy to understand. The use of syllables is very imaginative :)

This is great. I really love the idea. :)

I thought this poem was very interesting. I really like the thought that you put in to it. Some of your ideas were a little brief. I too love to play with formating. 

I really liked this.  It's simple but something keeps me thinking about it.

Well, yes..yes-ish.... I sorta like it. I like the rythem of the way it would sound if read normally, I like the sentiment and the thought; the reminder of all the posiblillities that a blank page allows. But honestly, meter and syllables are are supposed to be tools to accentuate and beautify the poem. If, after setting it into the form you desire the poem is LESS apealling rather than MORE, then either the added form is a mistake, or more work needs to be done. I loved the beginning (ruined on... (more »)

Grr. The formatting made the likes all funky. There's one less syllable per line, if you can't tell.