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The rain that fell yesterday
it was like it washed everything away
it made it all new
and it replenished my sanity.

Everything seemed to be going wrong
but then that great rain drop landed on me
It made me think of life
and who I am meant to be.

Life all around is so out of control
but I am a calm ocean in the day-
Its all because
yesterday is the day the rain come down and washed my fears away.

It gave me new hope
and it showed me the right way.
The rain that pored yesterday-
It was the first heartbeat that set me free.




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torilutz8 said...
May 18, 2012 at 12:32 pm:
This is awesome, I love the rain! A few gramatical mistakes, but other than that really awesome!
 
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torilutz8 said...
May 18, 2012 at 12:32 pm:
This is awesome, I love the rain! A few gramatical mistakes, but other than that really awesome!
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 2:25 pm :
Thanks soo much!!!:D
 
ToranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 8:53 pm :
i really like your wor because it really touches me and i can apply it to my life. it isnt just words that sound inspiring, are words that scream about a dark past, your words always keep me looking up at the sky and praying for a brighter tomorrow
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 8, 2013 at 1:49 pm :
Awh Toran you are welcome I will always try to be here for you and others to help yall. You always brighten my day too :)
 
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Feb. 8, 2013 at 6:48 pm :
Haha, thanks so much. I re-read my commet from before...how in the world did i make so many spelling and grammar errors? :o
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 1:39 pm :
Haha your welcome ;) But no worries on spelling I understand.
 
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