My life.

May 1, 2012
By Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
3 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can save you but yourself, and you're worth saving. Its a war not easily won but if anything is worth winning then this is it" --Unknown


My life.
Something you could say is almost perfect.
No worries,
No fighting,
No pain.
No, my life, from the moment I open my eyes, disappointment washes over me.
The disappointment of my eyes opening up to the world once more.
The disappointment of living another day acting as if I'm fine.
My life is a place where fighting is a continuous battle that never seems to stop.
A life where pain aches in my body continuously because living with someone whose definition of love is hurt is slowly killing me...
Their words, peircing my mind like a dagger, digging deeper into my flesh.
My life is a place where I wish I could lay myself down...and put me to rest..


The author's comments:
This came straight from the heart.

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on May. 18 2012 at 11:39 am
Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
3 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can save you but yourself, and you're worth saving. Its a war not easily won but if anything is worth winning then this is it" --Unknown

Thank you:)

on May. 18 2012 at 11:34 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I can totally relate to this. My life is pretty perfect, but I have people who try to tear me down every day. I really liked the word choice and it's a great poem. Keep writing :))

on May. 8 2012 at 5:14 pm
Lil-Bear BRONZE, Livingston, Montana
3 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can save you but yourself, and you're worth saving. Its a war not easily won but if anything is worth winning then this is it" --Unknown

Thank you!

on May. 8 2012 at 5:08 pm
DarkAngel251 BRONZE, Tiny, Other
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Good job, I can relate to this poem myself. Very well written.


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