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Becoming Strong This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Picking up a pen and putting down
the sword
Causes more harm than ever before
Letting out the feelings society told me
were wrong
Stepping up from the shadows, with the message I am strong
You pointed out my flaws as if I couldn't
already see them
Turning myself into my worst enemy
But now I'm facing those stares and
whispers that used to cripple me
From these bonds of hatred I can and
will break free
No one can stop me now, I am no slave to man and their thoughts of right and wrong
Who are you to say I don't belong?
The definition of beauty is nonexistent
A sense of belonging seems so distant
They put strict limitations on who we are
expected to be
If you dare to be different, you'll be
criticized, I guarantee
They will make you feel small, worthless, and insignificant
But in reality you are simply magnificent
Being yourself shouldn't come with a cost
to pay
People talk about change that fails to
happen every day
Nobody can ever know the torture of hate
Or the emotional scars it creates

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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amberrenay said...
today at 9:29 am:
This is a wonderful piece of writing, its so true! This ties great with my life, i just think you are an amazing writer!
 
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JNajeraO1205 said...
Mar. 29 at 3:36 pm:
Really cool. Nice job on it. I could read it over and over again.
 
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Brandon M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27 at 9:57 pm:
One of thosepoems that would be awesome as a song too. Very nicely done.
 
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Diana P. said...
Mar. 26 at 10:13 pm:
I love the strong use of words and the message. It's something like i would write. I can so relate!
 
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La'Toya12 said...
Mar. 25 at 1:08 pm:
Nice
 
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LeighFreyreThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23 at 11:05 pm:
Hey, thought that it was really good, jst one constructive thing that I thought of when reading that i think would make it fabulous. Right now you are ending all of the lines on the rhyme, but i think that it would be interesting to have each full phrase as a line and embed the rhyme within the line. This is really precious, tho, I love ur sentence structure! Fab work!
 
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pulledheartstringThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15 at 1:10 am:
I really like the language in this poem. Thanks for sharing. :)
 
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HeavenCooleyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 14 at 10:12 am:
This was great. I loved it, keep up the good work.
 
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thegreatmorryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 7 at 6:52 pm:
awesome:) this was quite the poem
 
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JRayeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 6 at 3:07 pm:
Beautiful! This is so good, keep writting!
 
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foreverSmallThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 5 at 7:00 pm:
Your poem AWOKE me. I am so glad you wrote this. You are a very talented writer. I think everyone should read this! I am so glad I heard you because your words are strong, beautiful, and utterly true
 
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MadLibs said...
Mar. 5 at 7:33 am:
I love how this is relatable and passionate in a subtle way. Great piece.
 
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lexi-94-95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3 at 6:34 pm:
girl this is a gift go far with this...its amazing....definatly worth your wild....i loved it
 
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GlittaDreamz said...
Mar. 2 at 4:42 pm:
You can almost make this a rap!
 
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thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2 at 6:18 am:
loved this. beautifully written.  
 
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L.E.Liza101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 1 at 2:54 pm:
It is really is an amazing poem.
 
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CrazyGirl01This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 1 at 9:03 am:
That was amazing!!! Loved it!
 
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