April 27, 2012
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Falling out of a tree
Can be fun
While your falling
You are flying
Feel the weightlessness
I enjoy falling
Out of a tree
Time slows
The wind blows
Then ground comes
Time speeds up
Back to reality
Impact shakes
Falling was wondrous,
Landing sucked.

You can fall for a person
That can be
When you’re with them
Time doesn’t slow
It speeds up
You want to be with them
Time disagrees
You say goodbye
That’s landing
Instead of body shaking
Your hearts breaking
For a friend
Or a stranger
It’s all the same
You’re falling either way
It is wondrous,
But goodbye sucks.

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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 4:23 pm
I love the landing sucks part xD I laughed a bit because it was eloquent writing and then... landing sucks. But I love the idea it's a great poem :)
BT1718 replied...
May 1, 2012 at 10:30 am
thank you i wasnt sure if other people would like that part
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