Animal Sufferage

April 23, 2012
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They are the devoured,
The blinded,
The maimed,
The dis-armed,
The trampled,
The lamed.
They died freezing,
Blown apart,
These helpless victims,
And unnamed

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Hannabug said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 4:58 pm
love it!!!
Ashley_Tucker said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 2:02 pm
I love it! Some people might think it's too short, but I think it's perfect. The last line brought the whole thing together.
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Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:48 pm
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rockmafia-611 said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:47 pm
Don't you think it's toooo short??
Shnitzal-face replied...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 10:03 am
Well I wanted it to be short, its to sort of get to the point. Not many people and organizations see that animals have an impact. And the shorter they are, the louder and more questionable they can become.
Sarah_Oso This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 7:33 pm
I agree! And rhyme makes it even better. Nice poem.
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