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He took her by the hands
Holding them in his
Kissing her head softly
Trying to give her bliss

"Everything will be okay
I'll be here to see this through
Please don't lose your hope and faith
I'm just sorry I did this to you"

Her tears continued to fall
Her eyes showing true fear
"Do you really promise
Or will you leave me in a year?"

His heart filled with pain
As she tried to pull from his grip
"You can't feel love,
So I'll just save you the trip."

"If you really think I'll leave,
I promise you that I won't.
Please don't believe that.
For one second don't."

She just ran from him
Leaving him behind to hurt
Letting him eat his words
While also eating her dirt

"Seems your leaving me instead
Not the other way around
But with our baby's life at stake..."
He muttered to the ground

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BrandalynBooth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 3, 2013 at 1:01 pm
Wow, this is really well written and so sad xx great work   
RokkoZee said...
Sept. 17, 2013 at 5:21 pm
Wow very well-written, but also very profound and meaninful... Definitely 5/5, great job!! :D
hrj_nikki14 said...
Sept. 13, 2013 at 3:49 pm
I really, really liked this one Angels. Very heart-wrenching. Keep it up!!
TheUnwantedTRUTH said...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 11:47 am
it waas emotional in a good way
AnnaRead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 2:22 pm
This has a potential to we wonderful, if you just developed it a little more.
TheUnwantedTRUTH replied...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 11:50 am
emotional in a good way  
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