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don't look it left, you left

don't look for it, it left
it's been gone for far to long
and your just noticing now
shows how much you missed it
when it left I fell down
and I kissed it
I ALONE try to pull it back
but no it had to go
it's a team effort you see
and some where a long the line
my partner left my side




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torilutz8 said...
May 1, 2012 at 10:10 am:
It's good, just work on your spelling and clarity :) 
 
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katieRainbowsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 8:52 pm:
love this one to
 
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life.is.charming said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 5:11 pm:

i like this poem.. the feelings of abandonment and despondency are obvious.. i think it should be a little more detailed though..

 

 
maddyhatterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 6:27 pm :
i left room for imagenation sure it's vague but thats the point any body who reads it can make it fit there own story
 
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