I thought...and i was wrong

April 13, 2012
By Erika2015 GOLD, Monroeville, Pennsylvania
Erika2015 GOLD, Monroeville, Pennsylvania
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Forever seemed long
It seemed long lasting.
Our last kiss.
Our last words.
The last thing you
Physically spoke to me was
"I Love You."
In that moment
I could cry.
We looked into each others eyes.
My big deep brown eyes
In your small but unique hazelnut eyes.
I thought i knew.
I thought you'd stolen my heart.
I thought i was in
But I guess I was wrong.

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on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:41 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Totally relatable. Great way to extract emotion from your readers.


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