April 13, 2012
By CrescentKeeper PLATINUM, Perry, Utah
CrescentKeeper PLATINUM, Perry, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Give Credit Where it's due

I live is the invisible bubble
It sarouds me and keeps me safe
It tells me how to live
It prepares me
I grow and live
My bubble starts to dissolve
When it leaves I am vaunerable
Like a worm in the sun
I can't find the invisable bubble
I outgrew it- my shell
The world sees me
Without my invisible bubble
Life is different from the bubble

The author's comments:
I wrote this for anyone who is getting ready to grow up

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DanielM. said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 6:27 pm
Thats was a really good poem. Great Job. I felt the message that you were bringing out. hey, can you read my comment on my story called Secrets by Daniel M.


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