Conditional Love

April 10, 2012
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe


You tell me it would all be different
if only I was older
You say that it will all be OK one day
but you turned out just like the rest of them

Your love is only conditional love
you think you can make it better
but in fact you made me a little more fragile
by the minute I feel myself growing weaker

I open up and let you into
places no one has ever gone
but it was all just a game again to see how far
to push me and this tI'me I'm over the lI'mit

Your love is only conditional love
never "I'll be here when you need me"
its always the same
with this stupid conditional love

I put everything out for the taking
just to be stepped on and left out in the rain
never finding what it truly means to love
always finding out what it means not to love

Your love is only conditional love
and it always will be
nothing could make this better
nothing could make this hurt go away

all because of your conditional love


The author's comments:
This is to this guy that i thought liked me, but obviously you can't judge a book by its cover

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on May. 11 2012 at 7:04 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is the air we breathe." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Being sad is a waste of time." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Girls should never be afraid to be smart." - Emma Watson

I really liked it. I can really relate to this. Very well written!

on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:58 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

always writing is my life :)

BuggyorTbug said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:56 am
BuggyorTbug, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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no problem keep writing no matter what anyone else says :)

on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:54 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

Thanks tht means alot :)

BuggyorTbug said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:53 am
BuggyorTbug, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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you have a gift my friend :)

on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:50 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you

:)


BuggyorTbug said...
on Apr. 26 2012 at 8:42 am
BuggyorTbug, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Hey its Tbug and this is awesome

on Apr. 19 2012 at 9:12 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

yea... :) nd thank u

on Apr. 19 2012 at 9:10 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I like it---sounds like the antagonist failed to make the big gesture. Cool~

on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:07 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thanks i put alot into this poem

teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:02 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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I like the poem, it's just perfect. :)

on Apr. 16 2012 at 6:45 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thanks :) and those are like the choruses in way

on Apr. 16 2012 at 6:43 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Good.. But I think the word "conditional love" was overused. And that helped ruin the flow.


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