Conditional Love

You tell me it would all be different
if only I was older
You say that it will all be OK one day
but you turned out just like the rest of them

Your love is only conditional love
you think you can make it better
but in fact you made me a little more fragile
by the minute I feel myself growing weaker

I open up and let you into
places no one has ever gone
but it was all just a game again to see how far
to push me and this tI'me I'm over the lI'mit

Your love is only conditional love
never "I'll be here when you need me"
its always the same
with this stupid conditional love

I put everything out for the taking
just to be stepped on and left out in the rain
never finding what it truly means to love
always finding out what it means not to love

Your love is only conditional love
and it always will be
nothing could make this better
nothing could make this hurt go away

all because of your conditional love





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JessicaRae7 said...
May 11, 2012 at 7:04 am
I really liked it. I can really relate to this. Very well written!
 
SilentAssassin said...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:42 am
Hey its Tbug and this is awesome
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:50 am

thank you

:)

 
SilentAssassin replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:53 am
you have a gift my friend :)
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:54 am
Thanks tht means alot :)
 
SilentAssassin replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:56 am
no problem keep writing no matter what anyone else says :)
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 8:58 am
always writing is my life :)
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 9:10 am
I like it---sounds like the antagonist failed to make the big gesture. Cool~
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 9:12 am
yea... :) nd thank u
 
teamo14 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:02 am
I like the poem, it's just perfect. :)
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:07 am
thanks i put alot into this poem
 
recurring_resilience said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 6:43 am
Good.. But I think the word "conditional love" was overused. And that helped ruin the flow.
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 6:45 am
thanks :) and those are like the choruses in way
 
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