Lost With The Sadow of Your Paine

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I don’t know what to say
To make this pain go away
My blood is draining from my face
My heart is losing is steady pace
My eyes role back my body goes numb
My heart is beating like a dyeing drum
Why don’t you leave me?
Why can’t I be free?
You cause all this pain
But what do you gain?
You have all your strength and all your pride
What do you have to hide?





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teamo14 said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 11:41 am
I like it :)
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 11:41 am
The poem seems ambiguous. It can be like a breakup, a death, or other things. 
 
AllysonMarie said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 5:03 pm
It was good.! But, I couldnt really foloow the message
 
KrystalT replied...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 11:47 am
Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!
 
AllysonMarie replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 7:37 am
It wasnt inproppriet or anything bad. It was my own opinion. (: And what do you mean "we'll" , Its been approved, I didnt say anything bad about the poetry. I thought it was ok.!
 
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 11:41 am
I love this one! The emotion is really deep and you can feel it in the words. LOVE IT
 
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