Lost With The Sadow of Your Paine

April 12, 2012
By Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I loved you once, I love you still, I always have, and I always will!"


I don’t know what to say
To make this pain go away
My blood is draining from my face
My heart is losing is steady pace
My eyes role back my body goes numb
My heart is beating like a dyeing drum
Why don’t you leave me?
Why can’t I be free?
You cause all this pain
But what do you gain?
You have all your strength and all your pride
What do you have to hide?



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teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 11:41 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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I like it :)

on Apr. 18 2012 at 11:41 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

The poem seems ambiguous. It can be like a breakup, a death, or other things. 

on Apr. 18 2012 at 11:41 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

I love this one! The emotion is really deep and you can feel it in the words. LOVE IT

AllysonMarie said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 7:37 am
It wasnt inproppriet or anything bad. It was my own opinion. (: And what do you mean "we'll" , Its been approved, I didnt say anything bad about the poetry. I thought it was ok.!

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:47 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!

on Apr. 14 2012 at 5:03 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

It was good.! But, I couldnt really foloow the message




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