No One But You

March 28, 2012
By JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back


Every minute of the day you lie
Not from others but from your self,
From the truth

Why be by yourself?
Why hide?
The greatest part from you
counts from the inside

Look in a mirror and what do you see?
Just opens your eyes to the bright side
You can be as great as you wanna be
but the only thing stopping it is your words
Not theirs.....



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on Oct. 31 2012 at 10:09 am
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Again, another interesting take on a poem. I think the mirror line provides the best imagery :) Nice job, Erin :)


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