April 4, 2012
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When will it come to be,
I wait and wait,
when will this pain,
finally end?
It seems I've become careless,
as I realize my fate,
the tremors of a broken heart,
a soul broken till it can,
die no more.
I'm asking only for,
this sickening pain to fade,
I say,
"be done with me!"
But I only suffer more.
I guess I'll continue,
to wait and wait,
I'll wait for the end,
the end of pain.
If I die,
from this terrible fate,
then you can give me,
all your salutations,
I'll be in peace.

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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:08 am
I really love the dialoge/question setup. It brings drama and emotion to the message your sending. Beautiful job.
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:21 am
Wow, thanks so much! I tried doing that..It didn't sound right at first but I wanted to write something I have never written before:) It was a little tricky, Lol..
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