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Give me your hand
And I will give you my heart.

Give me your heart
And I will give you my hand.

Give me your smile
And I will give you my laugh.

Give me your laugh
And I will give you my enduring smile.

Give me your eyes
And I will show you great things.

Show me great things
And I will never look away.

Give me your ears
And you will know of my love.

Give me your body
And we will make sweet music.

Give me your words
And I will eat them.

Give me your thoughts
And I will turn them into words.

Give me laughing,
Give me dancing,
Give me singing
and give me adventure.

Give me all of it.

Give me the good times,
Give me the bad times.
Give me times of peace.
Give me times of fight.

Let us love each other
With all of our might.

Give me your loyalty
Give me your honesty
Give me your lovey dovey mushy poetry.

Give me your always.
Give me your forever.

Make me your love,
Make me your lover,
Make me your dearling.

Always and Forever.




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MadelynHopeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 11:18 pm:
Well written, though I would have liked to see more of what the narrator would give back in return. Very sweet. Keep writing.
 
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Joshua. said...
May 16, 2012 at 6:23 pm:
Thank you very much!
 
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JackieH said...
May 16, 2012 at 6:09 pm:
soooooo romantic and cute!!! seriously love this. ADDED TO FAVORITES :)
 
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KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2012 at 6:03 pm:
AW, i LOVE this! If i guy wrote this for me, I would be in trouble. :-)
 
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peachybeechThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 2, 2012 at 5:04 pm:
This is amazing! It's so refreshing to see a love poem written by a guy. Check out my work? c:
 
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teamo14 said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 12:05 pm:
The best I've ever read :) keep writing!
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 12:00 pm:
At first, I read this because I was interested to read a mushy love poem written by a guy---please don't be offended, it's just in my experience, most who write of love generally are women. But I found this piece to be sweet and sentimental. It made me smile:)
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 12:00 pm:
At first, I read this because I was interested to read a mushy love poem written by a guy---please don't be offended, it's just in my experience, most who write of love generally are women. But I found this piece to be sweet and sentimental. It made me smile:)
 
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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 7:52 am:
This poem is so sweet and I loved how you added "Give me your lovey dovey mushy poetry." Which of course made you sound like an average guy. I really loved the poem. Pleade check out my work.
 
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Josika.Nav said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 2:51 am:
so cute!! :) i love it! great work and keep writing! XD
 
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AlaskaGrownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 12:27 am:
I really like this! It is amazing!
 
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SilverSun said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:48 am:
Beautiful. THis is so beautiful. I love the title becuz it really makes the poem awesome. THanks for writing this!
 
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Shortty1314 said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 9:06 pm:
I really enjoyed your repetition (: It made the poem more intense & understanding. Keep writing !!
 
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BananaGray said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 8:14 pm:
I loved this poem, repeating lines works for u!
 
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Perfectly_Imperfect. said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 7:18 pm:
I LOVED this poem one of the most unique pieces of work coming from a guy I have ever read before .It was extremely sweet (*: . 5 stars ! 
 
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Wonderment said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 7:14 pm:
One word. Cute. Simple as that
 
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JPanda13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 6:24 pm:
omg!!!this is sooo cute. Practically every girls dream poem she wants to be read to her. Or at least mine. Lol love it!!!
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 1:48 pm:

Gorgeous, I love this. I can't find anymore words for it, so I'll leave it at that and warmly congratulate you :)

 

 
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JamieNicole said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 1:45 pm:
This is amazing! Everyone needs some mushy lovey poetry!! Haha
 
DaLemon replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 7:19 pm :
OMG soooo perfect, It was funny, and terrific!
 
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