A Mushy Love Poem

March 18, 2012
By Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson


Give me your hand
And I will give you my heart.

Give me your heart
And I will give you my hand.

Give me your smile
And I will give you my laugh.

Give me your laugh
And I will give you my enduring smile.

Give me your eyes
And I will show you great things.

Show me great things
And I will never look away.

Give me your ears
And you will know of my love.

Give me your body
And we will make sweet music.

Give me your words
And I will eat them.

Give me your thoughts
And I will turn them into words.

Give me laughing,
Give me dancing,
Give me singing
and give me adventure.

Give me all of it.

Give me the good times,
Give me the bad times.
Give me times of peace.
Give me times of fight.

Let us love each other
With all of our might.

Give me your loyalty
Give me your honesty
Give me your lovey dovey mushy poetry.

Give me your always.
Give me your forever.

Make me your love,
Make me your lover,
Make me your dearling.

Always and Forever.



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MadHater said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 11:18 pm
MadHater, Trophy Club, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we have to fear is fear itself."
-Abraham Lincoln

or

"The price of success is responsibility."
-Winston Churchill

Well written, though I would have liked to see more of what the narrator would give back in return. Very sweet. Keep writing.

Joshua. GOLD said...
on May. 16 2012 at 6:23 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
10 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Thank you very much!

on May. 16 2012 at 6:09 pm
JackieH PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't break character, you've got a lot of heart. ~ The Killers

soooooo romantic and cute!!! seriously love this. ADDED TO FAVORITES :)

on May. 2 2012 at 6:03 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

AW, i LOVE this! If i guy wrote this for me, I would be in trouble. :-)

on May. 2 2012 at 5:04 pm
overexposed PLATINUM, Davie, Florida
27 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you compare the sorrows of real life to the pleasures of the imaginary one, you will never want to live again, only to dream forever.

This is amazing! It's so refreshing to see a love poem written by a guy. Check out my work? c:

teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:05 pm
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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The best I've ever read :) keep writing!

on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:00 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

At first, I read this because I was interested to read a mushy love poem written by a guy---please don't be offended, it's just in my experience, most who write of love generally are women. But I found this piece to be sweet and sentimental. It made me smile:)

on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:00 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

At first, I read this because I was interested to read a mushy love poem written by a guy---please don't be offended, it's just in my experience, most who write of love generally are women. But I found this piece to be sweet and sentimental. It made me smile:)

on Apr. 13 2012 at 7:52 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

This poem is so sweet and I loved how you added "Give me your lovey dovey mushy poetry." Which of course made you sound like an average guy. I really loved the poem. Pleade check out my work.

butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 12 2012 at 2:51 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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so cute!! :) i love it! great work and keep writing! XD

on Apr. 12 2012 at 12:27 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I really like this! It is amazing!

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:48 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Beautiful. THis is so beautiful. I love the title becuz it really makes the poem awesome. THanks for writing this!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 9:06 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

I really enjoyed your repetition (: It made the poem more intense & understanding. Keep writing !!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 8:14 pm
Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve"

I loved this poem, repeating lines works for u!

on Apr. 1 2012 at 7:18 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
I LOVED this poem one of the most unique pieces of work coming from a guy I have ever read before .It was extremely sweet (*: . 5 stars ! 

on Apr. 1 2012 at 7:14 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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One word. Cute. Simple as that

JPanda13 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 6:24 pm
JPanda13 GOLD, Roswell, New Mexico
10 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
just cuz you put syrup on somin dont make it pancakes
Whoever said sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me, had never been hit with a dictionary

omg!!!this is sooo cute. Practically every girls dream poem she wants to be read to her. Or at least mine. Lol love it!!!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:19 pm
Lady_Lemon GOLD, Franklin, Wisconsin
11 articles 1 photo 43 comments
OMG soooo perfect, It was funny, and terrific!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:48 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Gorgeous, I love this. I can't find anymore words for it, so I'll leave it at that and warmly congratulate you :)

 


on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:45 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

This is amazing! Everyone needs some mushy lovey poetry!! Haha




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