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Lent Freedom

March 26, 2012
By TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.


Flowing fluid grace,
Mixed with stunning spirit,
You deign to bow your head
To us

You tolerate
Our imperfections,
Our anger,
Our hate

You tolerate it,
You tame it,
Lend us your grace,
Your power

If only for a moment,
An hour, a day,
We are free,
As you are


The author's comments:
For a school project, mentored off of Tyger! Tyger!

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on Apr. 1 2012 at 8:17 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

this is simple and elegant :)

please check out my poems too :) thanks :)


MaddiK BRONZE said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 9:20 pm
MaddiK BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
4 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no great writing, only great re-writing."

I like this! It really paints a picture in my head!!