The Feelin'

Eyes ready to cry,
this feelin' will never die.
The feelin' of being torn,
it all started when she was born.
Being beatin' and cussed at,
she has hated things like that.
The feelin' of hatred developed inside,
It did nothing but eat at her pride.
She wanted to get away,
there was nothing more she could say.





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KaylaMarie3003 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 4:35 am

thank you :) i have published more but they havent been approved

 

 
Parishrut said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 4:34 am

I love how every second line goes perfectly with the first! The last two lines are very effective too.

Maybe I should say no more but tell you that it deserves a 5/5! 

 
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