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Had Me At Hello

They ask me how we met
I recall, walking into the room
And I became a ship
Confronted by two Caribbean seas
As I got weak at the knees
The ship that was me had quickly sunk
He was the drink, and I the drunk
Oh what gift this god bestow
When he spoke, he had me at hello

They ask me what she did
I simply say she stole my heart
She walked in and met my eyes
With her two small disks of night
Who knew night could shine so bright
I had to say something, had no choice
But I could barely call forth my voice
Something told me, “ Say Hi! GO!!”
She replied and had me at hello





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writer3499 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 3:33 pm
This is great!!
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 7:32 am
I love the creativity in this! Great Job!
 
LilZo11 replied...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 12:55 pm
thank you :)
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 7:47 am
Your welcome:)
 
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