Had Me At Hello

March 24, 2012
By Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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They ask me how we met
I recall, walking into the room
And I became a ship
Confronted by two Caribbean seas
As I got weak at the knees
The ship that was me had quickly sunk
He was the drink, and I the drunk
Oh what gift this god bestow
When he spoke, he had me at hello

They ask me what she did
I simply say she stole my heart
She walked in and met my eyes
With her two small disks of night
Who knew night could shine so bright
I had to say something, had no choice
But I could barely call forth my voice
Something told me, “ Say Hi! GO!!”
She replied and had me at hello



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on Mar. 28 2012 at 7:47 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Your welcome:)

on Mar. 27 2012 at 3:33 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

This is great!!

on Mar. 27 2012 at 12:55 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
99 articles 33 photos 91 comments
thank you :)

on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:32 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I love the creativity in this! Great Job!


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