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March 21, 2012
By MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
40 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.


why are you doing this
your tearing me apart
your sitting there laughing
with no pain upon your
heart

I gave you what you wanted
you took it too far
while you gave me nothing
and i

f

e

l


l
so hard

you made a promise
that you said you would KEEP
but i see that you B R O K E
it, so I'm going to sit here
and weep.


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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 10:03 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! I enjoyed reading this. Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:33 am
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
40 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

I don't plan on stop writttin and thank you

ZhadaMone GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 10:41 am
ZhadaMone GOLD, Westwood, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you as much as I did yesterday but, not as much as I will tommorow"

Wow, this poem is true. I have felt the emotion being conveyed in this poem. Good job, never stop writing :)


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