March 21, 2012
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why are you doing this
your tearing me apart
your sitting there laughing
with no pain upon your

I gave you what you wanted
you took it too far
while you gave me nothing
and i




so hard

you made a promise
that you said you would KEEP
but i see that you B R O K E
it, so I'm going to sit here
and weep.

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so_joy said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 10:03 pm
Great job! I enjoyed reading this. Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
MarleyRainbow said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:33 am
I don't plan on stop writttin and thank you
ZhadaMone said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 10:41 am
Wow, this poem is true. I have felt the emotion being conveyed in this poem. Good job, never stop writing :)
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