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A Mirrored Reply: To Her

March 15, 2012
By pcullen79 BRONZE, Ipswich, Massachusetts
pcullen79 BRONZE, Ipswich, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Isn't it pretty to think so? - Ernest Hemingway


To: Her

I float on, and reality overcomes the unknown

finally. We float on.

The railing guides me

and I guide you with your hand nestled inside mine.

My breath flutters and my lungs shake, softly.

Cigarette taste, dry mouth,

and hearing, “I love you”

and soft lips collide.

Fireworks in our minds

while sparks fall dead at our feet.

- Him

The author's comments:
a friend of mine wrote a poem, similar to this one but from "her" point of view, and i wrote a reply.. this reply.

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