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March 1, 2012
By A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

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I'll remember
The time that we danced
Until
We had to go home
I'll remember
The time
That I laid in your lap
And I didn't
Feel so alone
I'll remember
The time that we talked
For hours so long on the phone
I'll remember them
Like they were yesterday
And keep these memories
'Till you're gone

The author's comments:
I woke up at midnight, about two hours after the middle school dance, and this poem was in my veins.
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A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 2:19 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

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It was impossible not to write. This one almost made Stephen (the bf) cry xD Almost four months together and I could never be happier.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2012 at 2:56 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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Awwwww :) thats passion- referring to ur author's comment. but this is sweet