i want to

By , millstadt, IL
i don't want to die
i just want it to stop
i want to breath
but i don't want to think
i want my heart to beat
not to break
the world shakes me around
til i fall to the ground
but i'll get back up





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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 5:02 pm
This kinda gave me a fight-for-your-life-not-wallow-in-self-pity vibe, which I can totally appreciate. Except for the lack of capitalization of the "I", it was a good piece.
 
somerandomperson replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 10:03 pm
Lol thanks I promise to capitalize my I's more
 
lilmisswriterme said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 4:27 pm

hmmm this is kinda elementry in my opninion.. but  u do a good job at expressing your feelings :)

 

 
SamiLou said...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 4:09 pm
exactly how i feel
 
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