i want to

March 6, 2012
By Anonymous

i don't want to die
i just want it to stop
i want to breath
but i don't want to think
i want my heart to beat
not to break
the world shakes me around
til i fall to the ground
but i'll get back up


The author's comments:
i feel like giving up but i wont

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on Apr. 17 2012 at 10:03 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

Lol thanks I promise to capitalize my I's more

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:02 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

This kinda gave me a fight-for-your-life-not-wallow-in-self-pity vibe, which I can totally appreciate. Except for the lack of capitalization of the "I", it was a good piece.

on Apr. 17 2012 at 4:27 pm
lilmisswriterme BRONZE, Milford, Delaware
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hmmm this is kinda elementry in my opninion.. but  u do a good job at expressing your feelings :)

 


SamiLou SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 4:09 pm
SamiLou SILVER, Lee&#39s Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagining the future is a kind of nostalgia"
-John Green (Looking For Alaska)

exactly how i feel


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