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“I miss you”
only reminds me you’re gone.
“I need you”
only reminds me you’re not coming back.
“I love you”
only reminds me you took my heart with you.
“I want you”
only reminds me you were never mine to have.

The pain from these words only remind me you were real.





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Joshua. said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 7:15 pm
Good stuff!
 
JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 7:09 pm
This is lovely and sad and it holds so much emotion and meaning....i love it, 5/5 =)
 
raeee said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 4:23 pm
This is so simple, and yet it holds so much meaning. I thoroughly enjoyed it, it made me feel the pain and the hurt and yet the love all at the same time. I would dig deeper, but I haven't the time. Keep writing! You're wondrous!
 
futurenovelist1577 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 8:04 pm

Its short and straight to the point. MY type of poem! I really liked it and i hope you continue to write more like it! :)

 

 
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