Still Standing

March 6, 2012
By Jadakins BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
Jadakins BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
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It eats my inside.
Its best friend.

Go hand and hand,
To make me fall,
But still,
Still I stand.

Attacks through School,
Attacks through Friends,
Attacks through Family,
It never ends.
Yet still,
Still I stand.

I am a soldier,
That cant be beat,
Pain, I feel,
And worry ,no defeat
But, still I stand,
With hopes and dreams.
Never giving up.
(Not letting them win).
I am here to stay.


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on Mar. 12 2012 at 8:32 am
albealer SILVER, Bluffton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is Limited. Imagination encircles the world."~Albert Einstein

Sounds almost like you could turn it into a short song. I like the feeling behind it and really enjoy the flow of the poem. Great job!

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 8:38 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Great poem! I really like it!


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