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Itsy Bitsy Spider

Itsy Bitsy Spider
Awaiting your small prey,
Why must you choose me
To torment on this day?
Silently you sit,
Draw your final breath.
Beware of the
SMACK!
...It's the sound of death.





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laurenmay123 said...
May 5, 2012 at 8:51 pm

Oh my gosh! This was so cute. I mean, I hate spiders, so I loved the ending. 

I like how you took a well known nursery-rhyme and modernized it, meanwhile keeping it's prior rythum/flow. Great job, really :D

 
Padfoot507 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2012 at 7:06 am
thanks so much! and i know, spiders are terrible XP
 
Kestrel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2012 at 6:49 pm
I can relate! LOL. thats all. 
 
Padfoot507 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 2:03 am
hahaha thanks kes :) yep, spiders arent my thing XD
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 11:07 pm

Do you deal in personification much? 

Amazzing poem, I love your form. 

 
sandyflower replied...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 4:41 pm
Cute..such a sweet twist to the nursery rhym
 
Padfoot507 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2012 at 7:06 am
thank you! :)
 
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