Itsy Bitsy Spider

February 29, 2012
By Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka


Itsy Bitsy Spider
Awaiting your small prey,
Why must you choose me
To torment on this day?
Silently you sit,
Draw your final breath.
Beware of the
SMACK!
...It's the sound of death.


The author's comments:
Spiders don't amuse me.

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on Jun. 9 2012 at 2:03 am
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

hahaha thanks kes :) yep, spiders arent my thing XD

on May. 7 2012 at 7:06 am
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

thank you! :)

on May. 7 2012 at 7:06 am
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."
-Lenka

thanks so much! and i know, spiders are terrible XP

on May. 5 2012 at 8:51 pm
laurenmay123 GOLD, Chico, California
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"History doesn't repeat itself. Perhaps it..rhymes."

Oh my gosh! This was so cute. I mean, I hate spiders, so I loved the ending. 

I like how you took a well known nursery-rhyme and modernized it, meanwhile keeping it's prior rythum/flow. Great job, really :D


on May. 2 2012 at 6:49 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
30 articles 11 photos 193 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

I can relate! LOL. thats all. 

on Apr. 6 2012 at 4:41 pm
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

Cute..such a sweet twist to the nursery rhym

on Mar. 16 2012 at 11:07 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Do you deal in personification much? 

Amazzing poem, I love your form. 



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