outside

February 23, 2012
By chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I pretty much try to stay in a constant state of confusion just because of the expression it leaves on my face. - Johnny Depp


an old abandoned
opera house
in the middle of
nowhere

a faint voice
is whispering

a solo meant
for two

through the cracked
window

it’s
darker
than
night

a woman’s
silhouette
is in the distance

she softly
whispers

the solo meant
for two

she never
pauses

neither do
i



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on Feb. 29 2012 at 6:51 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Wow, you know, usually neglect of capitalization and punctuation would really annoy me, but you do it in such a way that it adds more and more to ever poem you write :)

Your poetry is so soft and sentimental and breezy, something I love finding on here, and which I rarely come across.



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