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The Ocean or the Fire

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Fire hits the edge of the ocean as they battle to see who'd win, but like we know, nothing has the power to defeat the mighty waves of the ocean.



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Joshua78 said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 10:09 am:
You should make it a little longer to make it less like a haiku and more like a free verse
 
Smattox replied...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 11:25 am :
Thanks for the advice.
 
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