Imaginary

February 18, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Pulling you down,
Can you surrender it all?
Tears sigh heavily,
As they...darling...
They burn...
Whisper against us,
Chasing the light,
Radiance beckons inside that pale blue sea...
Running towards a seductive illusion...
We are,
I realize...
Only a dream.

But don't let me wake...
Keep my heart still,
As you love me,
And sing once more...
Forever and ever...

You are Imaginary.~


The author's comments:
Just thinking back... And this appeared(: <3

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:58 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

The recurring prevalence of sexual undertones makes me question the sanctity of this relationship. While beautifully worded I found this a bit hard to follow..

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:39 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Written, this one is so amazing, and I totally know what you're writing about :) its fantastic!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:16 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I was totally imagining a dream the whole time. Another super awesome poem

on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:18 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you(: I don't know why I can't see the beauty of my words...

Rain. SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:11 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

You seem to have this technique that not a lot of people have and that's that you're able to portray a lot of imagery and I just really enjoy that about your pieces.

on Mar. 10 2012 at 8:12 pm
waterbendercarorain GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thats amazing i really liked it

on Mar. 10 2012 at 3:18 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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This is really good. It almost seems like a fuzzy memory. Something that is imagenary. I like it alot, good stuff.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 1:24 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you ^^

on Feb. 23 2012 at 5:34 pm
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD, Raynham, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am proud of who I am. I believe in what I do." -Pavel Chekov (Star Trek The Original Series, episode: "The Way To Eden")

I really like this. It's so delicate and simple, but you still got your point completely across. Amazing job. :)


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