Imaginary

February 18, 2012
Pulling you down,
Can you surrender it all?
Tears sigh heavily,
As they...darling...
They burn...
Whisper against us,
Chasing the light,
Radiance beckons inside that pale blue sea...
Running towards a seductive illusion...
We are,
I realize...
Only a dream.

But don't let me wake...
Keep my heart still,
As you love me,
And sing once more...
Forever and ever...

You are Imaginary.~





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recurring_resilience said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:58 am
The recurring prevalence of sexual undertones makes me question the sanctity of this relationship. While beautifully worded I found this a bit hard to follow..
 
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:39 am
Written, this one is so amazing, and I totally know what you're writing about :) its fantastic!
 
SilverSun said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:16 pm
I was totally imagining a dream the whole time. Another super awesome poem
 
Triumphant said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 8:11 pm
You seem to have this technique that not a lot of people have and that's that you're able to portray a lot of imagery and I just really enjoy that about your pieces.
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 8:18 pm
Thank you(: I don't know why I can't see the beauty of my words...
 
invisiblepurpledragonflyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 8:12 pm
thats amazing i really liked it
 
Wonderment said...
Mar. 10, 2012 at 3:18 pm
This is really good. It almost seems like a fuzzy memory. Something that is imagenary. I like it alot, good stuff.
 
Artemisia said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 5:34 pm
I really like this. It's so delicate and simple, but you still got your point completely across. Amazing job. :)
 
WrittenEmotions replied...
Feb. 24, 2012 at 1:24 pm
Thank you ^^
 
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