Silver Moon

February 23, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


In the arms with you,
my eyes are turned skyward.
Its so beautiful seeing the stars dancing,
and the silver moon glistening so brightly.
It reminds me of home.
I ask you,
if I close my eyes;
"Will you be here when I wake?"
You nod a yes, and kiss me on the cheek.
You say, "Ill always be here when you wake."
You take away the pain and leave light,
there's never a shadow to strangle me;
there's only you sense I came running to you,
there's only love to no end or sight.
Did you know,
"God, I love you just as you love me?"
Without you there is no tomorrow,
there is no cede in tears when you seem far away.
And that's why I look skyward, because;
I know everything's going to be okay.


The author's comments:
"I Was thinkin one day what would i be without God..Truth is if I didnt have him my life would be a dark void that it used to be. But knowing he is in my life I know everything is going to be okay."

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on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:51 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow thats awsome and thanks so much! :)

on Mar. 8 2012 at 2:23 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

This is a really good poem. I've just recently accepted God into my life and I'm still struggling but I now know He will always be there...even when I don't know! Great job, you're a great poet and inspire people with your words!

on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:17 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awsome thanks so much!:) And thats ok, my comments post twice sometimes too..And you dont have to worry about me quitting writting;) Thats not an option or a road I plan to take. Ill always write!

on Mar. 2 2012 at 4:33 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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wow dont know why that posted twice sorry

on Mar. 2 2012 at 4:32 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
99 articles 33 photos 91 comments
wow you are really talented you should stick with writing. ive been working on writing a book, its a collection of every single poem i write in highskool starting from the summer of last year to the end of 2015 when i graduate it hasnt even been a whole year and its so long but i found that when i compare my most recent to my 1st poems iv improved exponentially so keep writing and see how much you improve and get better and better

on Mar. 2 2012 at 4:32 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
99 articles 33 photos 91 comments
wow you are really talented you should stick with writing. ive been working on writing a book, its a collection of every single poem i write in highskool starting from the summer of last year to the end of 2015 when i graduate it hasnt even been a whole year and its so long but i found that when i compare my most recent to my 1st poems iv improved exponentially so keep writing and see how much you improve and get better and better

on Feb. 27 2012 at 7:47 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awe, really? Thanks so much beautifulspirit:) You just made my day!

on Feb. 24 2012 at 7:40 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Just when I thought "silver Moon" was your best work so far, this one pops up. You never fail to impress~


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