Malevolence MAG

March 10, 2008
By Lipstickandink SILVER, Malvern, Pennsylvania
Lipstickandink SILVER, Malvern, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

If I were speaking to him I would say
That I am dead with his weapon lodged in my throat
And I would ask him
To take it out.

In my first-person statement, I say
I am too sick
In mind, in heart
In my second-person, I state
You are my malevolence
And speak merely to enslave me
In my third-person, I cry
Those two, sitting just beside each other
Hate with the passion that sears from fire

If I were speaking to you I would say
That I am dead with your weapon lodged in my heart
And I would dare you
To take it out.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 16 comments.


on Nov. 23 2011 at 11:42 pm
stillheartless PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
40 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you. I love you. I send this message through my fingers and into his, up his arm and into his heart. Hear me. I love you. And I'm sorry to leave you." -Jenny Downham

The words turned green as i read this. THe jealousy you convey is palpable. I love it! (:

on Nov. 4 2011 at 10:10 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
12 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.
-- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

very expressive. the feeling of pain and jealousy is overwhelming.

on Mar. 31 2011 at 8:06 am
apurplechick BRONZE, North Little Rock, Arkansas
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love all hate few trust none" by william shakespear

i read it twice and still i cry

on Dec. 13 2010 at 8:54 pm
This poem still makes me cry.  It's one of my favorites. You've captured my relationship in three stanzas. <3 Thank you.

on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:25 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


on May. 29 2010 at 2:46 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
68 articles 0 photos 90 comments
This is one of the best poems i've read today and i can really relate, i love this poem! keep up your writing!!

on May. 23 2010 at 4:56 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I love this!!! Its really relatable and strong and creative how you put the situation in different perspectives. Great work.

on May. 7 2010 at 11:46 pm
Beautiful. 5 stars.

on Apr. 8 2010 at 2:10 pm
dancechik BRONZE, New Lenox, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOVED YOU ONCE, LOVED YOU STILL, ALWAYS HAVE, ALWAYS WILL.
IM THE KINDA GIRL WHO COULD BURN THE HOUSE DOWN-- MAKING A BOWL OF COLD CEREAL.
WHEN LIFE GIVES YOU LEMONS, STUFF THEM IN YOUR BRA AND GO FLIRT WITH SOME SOPHMORES!

wow that is super-fantastically amazing!!! nice.

Birder SILVER said...
on May. 18 2009 at 12:58 pm
Birder SILVER, Waterboro, Maine
6 articles 22 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do unto others as you would have them do unto you, unless they do unto you first, then open a can of unto on to them."

"Obey the ninja."

"What's that? And why does it say snickle tickle?"

Wow. I mean...wow. This is just so amazing. Keep it up.!.!.!.!.!.!!!

iread/write said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 12:29 am
wow so powerful, such an image. amazing keep writing, keep sending chills down my back!!! i love the attitude of this poem, love the way your meaning is portrayed. keep it up!!

nugget said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 10:06 pm
so powerful, deep and moving! all this in just a few sentences!!! keep writing!

on Jan. 2 2009 at 7:12 pm
This poem (I call it a poem because I am at a loss for a better word- it's really a piece of artwork) expresses so much in so little words. It's disturbingly beautiful.

Really brilliant work.

sayaex said...
on Dec. 23 2008 at 3:12 am
this poem is extoxicating. its so passionate and extraordinary. i totally get your picture

blacvelvet said...
on Dec. 13 2008 at 1:58 pm
"And I would Dare you to take it out" that sent shivers down my spine. It was so amazing!!!

annefavs said...
on Dec. 7 2008 at 10:31 pm
This poem was extraordinary. Its disturbing narrator was passionate in her (I think it is a her) erratic and irregular narration. I love it as you can tell.




Swoon Reads

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!